Mihi

Tena koutou katoa

ko Flaxmere ahau

Kei Flaxmere toku kainga mainei

Ko Frimley toku kura

Ko Cowa toku matuo

Ko Letty toku whaea

Ko Chosen toku ingoa

No Reira tena koutou tena koutou tena tatou  

katoa

the climbing mountin

       

• Amazing things pic story - choose a picture from the file sent to you in your writing folder.Make a new writing document and title it.
• Your story should have a hook in sentence, a beginning middle and end, descriptive words, long and short sentences and capital letters and full stops.
• Your story could have paragraphs, speech and speech marks, alliteration, onomatopoeia and similes.
• Edit and check your story on your own , with a buddy and have it checked by a teacher before you blog.

   This is a amazing. If I was that I will climb because it look’s yummy. for me maybe if they made it to the top. I would be amazed when I'm there. I'm gonna eat some of it  because I like watermelon. It is my favourite brain food. I wish I was little so I can climb on the watermelon. I like watermelon. I would climb all over it  because it is big and you can eat it. It is super delicious. I like watermelon at my old house .I had one and it was good when I ate one before and I felt cold as well when I ate it also are these real People on this picture or is it just figures?

hawke's bay fire story

Hawke’s Bay

Huge fire sparks State of emergency

Flames horrify residents

As I stood at the end of my driveway I could see the violent,brutal flames of the savage fire destroy my precious home. I run outside and all my precious things got burnt

and I called the firemen.  They use a big hoe and used it to put out all the fire.  The firemen are fast as they drive. They are good as they are saving people.

The people were happy as they were getting saved.

Once I used to go to a beach. It was fun as in the beach . I had fun with my family.

Wow look at that fire burn.                        

Oh no!! Everything burnt down.  All my  precious things  have burned down.  

Boom noooo my house!! Everything  explodes everything burnt to the ground.

Swing Bridge

WALT - use our senses and the 5 W’s when writing

If I were there I would walk there and have a picnic there with my family.  Who is the man that took a picture?  Maybe it was a man from another country that must be on the wobbly bridge

It looks like an enchanted place where no one has been  but I think people go there. I would like it there because there is water there and if it’s just a hole with water there. I wouldn't go in the hole with water in it. I would if it was a pond. I would go in it if it was a pond I would have fun in there.  It would be amazing if there was a bear there .I would call it Grizzly. I want to go there if I were there I would  go in  the water if it was salt water I wouldn't go in because I used to get sand In my ear. Once I had to put water in it and I had to pick it out and it worked. I’m never going  there again. There might be something over there  across that bridge, it might be another person or a view  All I see over there was a tree, a big tree, Why is it very foggy. It look’s like something. My family and  behind it but it’s foggy over there. I don’t know why you can’t see behind the tree. My family will go there  if I were there again we would talk and play and swim but it looks  like a yucky place where it might be smelly or something. It might smell good or bad I don’t know what it smells like it might smell like a normal beach. What will happen if we go there? I wonder if there is birds chirping there because I never hear birds chirping. It’s when I wake up I would climb that tree in the picture I would have fun on there. My mum would set the picnic up and I would have a drink because I get thirsty sometimes. We will have fun there if we were there I would have  been cool. I like bridges because it's fun to me I would of have a blast . I wish I was there so I can climb the tree that s in the picture. I like climbing trees. . use to climb a tree  that was really fun we would have a swim if that water wasn't dirty I wouldn't go deep.           My sister and I think they have a shark in that water  or is that in  another country maybe or not. My sister would play in there and that man or woman might be from another country like Australia or America or something  it might be a man.  He might have taken that picture  so everyone can ask questions about It.  If we were in there we would have a super fun time  and if we were done we will go home. I would have gone and done my chores and played on my phone.